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Sunday, June 3, 2012
the day holmes was missing
language is hard to read.
the different stories are in different colors than the headline. the headline is the biggest font and quite ambeguosui. all of the titles are ambugououi.
Monday, May 14, 2012
Mechanics of GCC
A few articles ya jerk;
http://www.newscientist.com/article/dn21733-arctic-methane-leaks-threaten-climate.html
http://www.newyorker.com/online/blogs/comment/2011/11/two-degrees-of-disaster.html
http://www.economist.com/blogs/democracyinamerica/2011/01/global_warming
http://hyperphysics.phy-astr.gsu.edu/hbase/thermo/grnhse.html
http://www.newscientist.com/article/dn21733-arctic-methane-leaks-threaten-climate.html
http://www.newyorker.com/online/blogs/comment/2011/11/two-degrees-of-disaster.html
http://www.economist.com/blogs/democracyinamerica/2011/01/global_warming
http://hyperphysics.phy-astr.gsu.edu/hbase/thermo/grnhse.html
Tuesday, May 8, 2012
fallacies of relevence
Fallacies of Relevance
evidence used is irrelevant to the actual argument
"this car is bad cuase it was made in japan"
"Everyone is doing it" or " The best people are doing it "
"there is not such things as protons because it does not make sense"
"i am doing it because my boss told me to, i dont really know why"
Sunday, May 6, 2012
Essay White Tiger , and The Assault
"Some characters in fiction are somehow familiar
and naturally believable; others are unlike anyone we have ever encountered.
How have at least two writers in your study made exotic or previously
unimaginable characters both interesting and credible?"
In fiction,
authors can create anything they imagine; from a whole new dimension to whole
new species. But sometimes they make their story happen in the normal world and
they can let their creativity run through some character. Make them works of
fiction that cannot truly exist. But the readers do not realize that those kinds
of characters cannot happen in their everyday life, they believe in their
existence. The Assault and The White Tiger are works of fiction that
shows this very efficiently. They both have characters that are interesting and
credible but are not familiar to the readers.
In The Assault the main character, Anton,
has experienced a tragedy and does not want to know the truth behind the night
were his family’s life was taken away unfairly. His life and personality is
very vastly affected by that night but he runs away from the truth. He chooses
a job, a wife, and a lifestyle because of his feelings that were created after
that night but he keeps on running away from the light and stays into the darkness.
This might seem credible but anyone in the world who had something happen to
them like Anton would either continue their life normally and trying to forget
about it rather than live based on it and ignores it.
Anton is a
very interesting character and he is credible at the same time but he is just a
work of fiction. The author uses Anton’s words to describe how he is running
away from what happened the night of the assault. But he is using Anton’s life
decisions and acts to describe how much he is stuck into that night. This is
making Anton very interesting but that kind of person in the true world is very
improbably to happen. But the readers of The Assault are credible with Anton’s
character in the book.
Anton is
made special from the rest of the people in the world of The Assault because he is the one who people knows as the the young
man who had his parents taken away because of a murder. We do not know anybody
like him in our everyday life so we believe that it is possible that somewhere
in the world there is someone special like him.
Many people
believe in fate but there are no scientific proofs for fate. Anton keeps on
meeting these people who are key to finding out the truth behind the night that
has changed him. He meets them at random places when he is not even looking for
them. This might seem like just a coincidence but it is not possible for
someone in real life to be completely dependent on fate. But it is very
credible because they all seem like mere coincidences that happen years apart
from each other. In the book the author makes fate into a real thing. But Anton
is not the only interesting and credible character in the book.
In The Assault Anton is the main character
and he is a special one. The main character in The White Tiger is the same. He is a very believable character but
impossible to exist in the physical world. The odds are against the existence
of a personality like Balram. The inspector who visits his school even calls
him The White Tiger; which means he is the different one from the others he is
special. The other made us believe that Balram was real when the only reality
in Balram is that he is a work of fiction.
Balram
starts it the poorest of the cities in India. The odds for him to ever be successful
coming from the darkness are so small that impossible in the normal world. He
is the only kid that can read and write. He is different from the others and
also as he was working in the tea shop he would educate himself. Those are the
kind of stuff that sounds credible but impossible. If you are uneducated from
the start you have no reason to be educated. You don’t even know how to be
educated. And it is impossible for someone that is that badly educated to end
up writing letters that are of such complexity. He has become a philosopher
from nothing. The author makes us believe in the character by telling us he is
a special one from the bunch, he is the White Tiger.
Also it is
very hard to get away with murder leaving that many evidence, especially if you
are only a driver. If we take in consideration how corrupted India is it is
nearly impossible to get away killing someone who is socially higher and
richer. This makes the story interesting but at the same and people believe it
as if it was a true story. But in the real world this would have never
happened. Or the chances are very slim for it to happen. This is why Balram is
The White Tiger.
In both the
arts of fiction The White Tiger and The Assault, the characters are
impossible to exist in the real world we live in. But we do not think of that
as we read us belive in their personalities. The authors make it possible by
classifying them as special people. Like the White tiger or the one from the
night of the assault. They are made apart from normal society.
Tuesday, May 1, 2012
nyan blog outline
"Some characters in fiction are somehow familiar and naturally believable; others are unlike anyone we have ever encountered. How have at least two writers in your study made exotic or previously unimaginable characters both interesting and credible?"
P1: Balram and Anton and how we have never met people like them.
P2: Anton not wanting to know more about his parents
P3: Balram murdering his boss and writing about being a social entrepreneur
i really dont know what else
Thursday, April 26, 2012
Monday, April 16, 2012
tigre blanc
comunism and fascism
premier of china social entrepeneur
the great socialist
comunismt vs democracy
premier of china social entrepeneur
the great socialist
comunismt vs democracy
the art of boredom
cintroversy makes art
fiction good/bad
fiction = fine art
we can enjoy fiction like art
history
fiction good/bad
fiction = fine art
we can enjoy fiction like art
history
Sunday, April 15, 2012
Thursday, April 12, 2012
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Tuesday, March 27, 2012
Perfume MOFO
- Perfume: burburry, 1 million, diesel
- Dr dre beats, Sleek by 50
- Absolut, Skyy, Patron, Black Label,
- Lacoste, Gucci,
- Apple, ALienware,
- Dr dre beats, Sleek by 50
- Absolut, Skyy, Patron, Black Label,
- Lacoste, Gucci,
- Apple, ALienware,
Monday, March 26, 2012
plan for the IA
Brand: Patron!
Idea: 2 different ads for the product. Each will have a high brand value for Patron. A high brand value that i will make for myself. I will Photoshop the pictures. The pictures will go into an magazine article about Patron. The article will actually be a kind of advertissment. It will be into a alcohol lover magazine or something like so.
Audience: Party people, night-lifers, drinkers, classy rich people.
Idea: 2 different ads for the product. Each will have a high brand value for Patron. A high brand value that i will make for myself. I will Photoshop the pictures. The pictures will go into an magazine article about Patron. The article will actually be a kind of advertissment. It will be into a alcohol lover magazine or something like so.
Audience: Party people, night-lifers, drinkers, classy rich people.
Sunday, March 25, 2012
P. 108-116 Relfectiiioooonnn
Anton and his family are at a funeral of a former member of the Resistance. He overhears a man names Take mention that he murdered a man and ask a question about it and then confirms that the man that Take killed was actually Fake Ploeg and he admits that it happened in front of his house. Take goes pale and then takes Anton for a talk away from the table. This is no coincidence it is all about fate. Anton married a girl who's father was friend to the men who shot the bullet that killed his entire family. And also Anton is not the kind of man to look for information about the assault he likes to forget about it and move on. It was a surprise that Anton said that to Take. We can see that they had to meet because of Fate. And also Take is in the same position as Anton, the night of the assault changed his life because his beloved one died that night. He never knew if she loved him back. But fate made Take meet Anton so that they can both get the information that they had been looking for their whole life. The difference is that Anton was not looking for the information when Take was ready to die to get that information. When Take is about to explain himself to Anton, Anton tries to shut Takes mouth because he did not wan to hear it but Take felt like he had to explain himself. Take explained himself by blaming everything on Fake Ploeg and the horrible acts he has made in his past. He is trying to say that what he did to Fake had to happen. That day is described as brilliant. Which means it is very bright, And we can see that Anton had just gained a lot of new understanding on what happend in the night of the assault. The cigarettes are also important because they are forgiveness. They try to make Take forgive about what happen and just move on. The more he is stuck in his past the more he has to smoke.
Monday, March 19, 2012
p. 81-82
Vive la resistance! In page 81-82 of the assault we have a riot against communism happening in Amsterdam and Anton's house is in the middle of the struggle. He is indifferent about the riots and he just wants to go home without having his rooms filled with people holding rocks. But as he gets home he meets an old classmate who happens to be the son of the man who's death killed his family and burned his house. They get into a conversation about what happend and Anton is saying that Fake's dads death was different from Anton's family death because he deserved it unlike his family. Fake gets pissed at Anton and throws the rock at the mirror. This scene is very powerfull because you can see the difference between Fake and Anton in education and at the same time you can see for the first time Anton is talking about his past. He is openly insulting Fake without really wanting to insult him. Anton needs anesthesia the pain from the past is comming back to hurt him. And then he gets a headache because that is what happens to Anton everyime he thinks about that incident that happend in his past. He says it is the sreams of the riots, the broken mirror and the oil everywhere but it actually is because of his discussion with fake which made him remember things he does not like to think about, learn about or wonder about.
Thursday, March 8, 2012
Anton is a young boy that is taken away from his family. This part of the book is the last time Anton sees his parents so it has a considerable importance to the story. There are symbols manifesting throughout the text like the lights and the bicycle. But to understand what is happening we need to know more about the context.
It is in the first chapter of the book where the main incident of the book happens. A important person was murdered in Anton's neiborhood and was moved in front of his house. his brother is on the run and he has been seperated from his parents as the military is settting his house on fire. He is getting in a car as he sees his mom and dad for the last time. At that moment he did not know that his parents were going to be murdered but for us a readers we had a few symbols and clues about the upcoming events.
The light is very important in the book. It tells us in what state the antagonist is, anton. If it is dark them most likely Anton is in a desesperate lost place. For example as he saw his mom for the last time in this text. It says he sees his mom further and furher into darkness. His mom is his source of hapiness or we can say his source of light. Without his parents he is being out into a darkness. It also says that flashlishts are being held against the house showing how much hapiness that house is brining andton and burning it lights up all the future hapiness he could have lived in it at once. And he missed it all. All cause of a bicycle.
The nbicycle is a symbol of the night where his life changed. The night he wandered off into darkness. in the text snton looks at the bicyle and it is surounded by frear and darkness to demonstrate or devastatting it is.
This text shows how ligh and darkness is very importatn for the structure of the whole story. The bycicle is also a source of darkness. Anton saw his parents for the last time and entered a car for the first time. Meaning it was the start of a new era. A era where anton would live many new experience he had heard of before but never actually lived.
It is in the first chapter of the book where the main incident of the book happens. A important person was murdered in Anton's neiborhood and was moved in front of his house. his brother is on the run and he has been seperated from his parents as the military is settting his house on fire. He is getting in a car as he sees his mom and dad for the last time. At that moment he did not know that his parents were going to be murdered but for us a readers we had a few symbols and clues about the upcoming events.
The light is very important in the book. It tells us in what state the antagonist is, anton. If it is dark them most likely Anton is in a desesperate lost place. For example as he saw his mom for the last time in this text. It says he sees his mom further and furher into darkness. His mom is his source of hapiness or we can say his source of light. Without his parents he is being out into a darkness. It also says that flashlishts are being held against the house showing how much hapiness that house is brining andton and burning it lights up all the future hapiness he could have lived in it at once. And he missed it all. All cause of a bicycle.
The nbicycle is a symbol of the night where his life changed. The night he wandered off into darkness. in the text snton looks at the bicyle and it is surounded by frear and darkness to demonstrate or devastatting it is.
This text shows how ligh and darkness is very importatn for the structure of the whole story. The bycicle is also a source of darkness. Anton saw his parents for the last time and entered a car for the first time. Meaning it was the start of a new era. A era where anton would live many new experience he had heard of before but never actually lived.
Monday, March 5, 2012
Sunday, March 4, 2012
Untitled... gigidy
Big Idea:POWER
Source: newsweek international
Type: Magazine advertisement, increase awareness.
Audience: Rich people because it is in the newsweek international. you don't have poor people reading that magazine. its more like wealthy, rich people.
We see: a lady running on a grassy landfield at the bottom of the image and there is a large amount of sky and in that sky we can see the sun. The sun and the skyy are very abstract, say squared, unreal while the lady and the grass looks like a genuine photography.
Repetition
Source: newsweek international
Type: Magazine advertisement, increase awareness.
Audience: Rich people because it is in the newsweek international. you don't have poor people reading that magazine. its more like wealthy, rich people.
We see: a lady running on a grassy landfield at the bottom of the image and there is a large amount of sky and in that sky we can see the sun. The sun and the skyy are very abstract, say squared, unreal while the lady and the grass looks like a genuine photography.
Retorique Devices.
Repetition
- "to" but that is not imporant
- "Unlimited" it is under the logo and also in the text
- "power" in different forms like powerful, powering...
- The difference in color of the lady/grass and the sky/sun
- The difference of texture and type of image between lady/grass and sky/sun. The sky/sun is more like a painting and the lady/grass is more of a photo. And the shapes are sharper for the lady.
- "further from our galaxy" and "closer to home" they go in the exact opposite direction they are juxtaposed.
- the sun is greates source of energy in our world. And it is shown by how important it is by being on the top right of the image and also the highest element of the image.
- at the bottom right there is a log
AIDA
Audience: Rich people. because it is in a rich magazine. And rich people have the money that suntech wants them to invest in them. So we know that they are looking for investors because the audience is wealthy people.
Interest: A cleaner world, enough energy for everybody and a development in technology.
Desire: Make the galaxy closer to us than ever before
Action: To learn more go to: www.suntech-power.com...
LOW CONCEPT
This ad is low concept because it does no recreate emotions in the audience. It is directly tied to nature and power. but the audience is not a bunch of environmentalist but wealthy people who are only going ot invest if they are going to win some money in the future.
Sunday, February 12, 2012
Tigidou Lay Lay
Film vs Book
It is all about reading between the lines. And in the movie version of the Great Gatsby it is quite hard to do so because it is so different from the book and so similar at the same time. There are motifs which has changed and some motifs which were added. But how does it differ from the book? Well let's start with the vest buckles.
In the movie there is a motif that has been added that was not in the book. That motif is the most important motif in the movie but was never even mentioned in the book. The vest buckles this motif is used to show the theme "Recapture the past". It is something that Daisy gave gatsby in the past when they were together and that he kept on him until death. The importance of those buckles are very well shown in the movie with the large amounts of extreme closups on them.
The car in the movie is not yellow. It was white instead, and this does not change too much the motifs origin but it does if you argue that the color yellow relates the sun and light to the car and then relate it to the motif of Sun and Light. White can also be seen as a bright light color so it is a little bit played around with but does not change the whole motif.
In the movie the light and dark contrast was kept as in the book with the rainy days or the very hot days full of sunlight. It was even easier to visualize because a movie is more visual than a book and also the camera style changed to give a more dramatic view of the scene and the music also helped give a feeling of darkness and sadness into the viewers.
So the movie kept some motifs, changed others slithly and also added a whole new motif but the big idea of the movie was kept the same and the scenes were almost all the same except for the small dialogue changes that the director added to the movie and also a few extra metaphors but it did not hurt the flow of the story one bit.
It is all about reading between the lines. And in the movie version of the Great Gatsby it is quite hard to do so because it is so different from the book and so similar at the same time. There are motifs which has changed and some motifs which were added. But how does it differ from the book? Well let's start with the vest buckles.
In the movie there is a motif that has been added that was not in the book. That motif is the most important motif in the movie but was never even mentioned in the book. The vest buckles this motif is used to show the theme "Recapture the past". It is something that Daisy gave gatsby in the past when they were together and that he kept on him until death. The importance of those buckles are very well shown in the movie with the large amounts of extreme closups on them.
The car in the movie is not yellow. It was white instead, and this does not change too much the motifs origin but it does if you argue that the color yellow relates the sun and light to the car and then relate it to the motif of Sun and Light. White can also be seen as a bright light color so it is a little bit played around with but does not change the whole motif.
In the movie the light and dark contrast was kept as in the book with the rainy days or the very hot days full of sunlight. It was even easier to visualize because a movie is more visual than a book and also the camera style changed to give a more dramatic view of the scene and the music also helped give a feeling of darkness and sadness into the viewers.
So the movie kept some motifs, changed others slithly and also added a whole new motif but the big idea of the movie was kept the same and the scenes were almost all the same except for the small dialogue changes that the director added to the movie and also a few extra metaphors but it did not hurt the flow of the story one bit.
Tuesday, January 31, 2012
ESSAY !!! WOOOOOOOOOOO
The Great Gatsby
Nick – East vs. West – Money
If the grass is greener on the other side, you can bet the water bill is higher. In the Great Gatsby this is true, because money makes a difference. The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald has a range of characters (Gatsby, Tom, Daisy…), motifs (the green light, the car crash…) and themes (Can you recapture the past? What are we going to do with ourselves…) but I will focus on only on character and tie him to a single theme and a single motif. The character is Nick and he relates very well to Money as a motif and East vs. West as a theme. By using several quotes from the chapter 1-5 I will explore this thesis more in depths.
What brings Nick to the East? After nick graduated from New Heaven he participated in the Great War and he enjoyed the counter-raid so much that for him the West was no more interesting, even though his family is very old money in the west. So he came east to get into the bond business since he already had connections. “Father agreed to finance me for a year, and after the various delays I came East, permanently, I thought, in the spring of twenty-two. P.9” This quote shows that nick is old money, his dad is ready to finance him for a year because they are rich and he can rely on his parents money but this quote also this quotes shows that he left the West thinking he would never go back and it foreshadows that he will come back to the West because the East is not made for him. This fits in the theme East vs. West because people go to the East thinking of a better life, but they always will come back to the West. This quote gives us information about Nick’s monetary situation, and opinions on the West and East.
In the first paragraph Nick tells us a lot about his life, so we can get a lot of information out of it. And at the same time Nick contrasts the difference between the West and the East. For example; “I lived at West Egg, the – well, the less fashionable of the two, though this is a most superficial tag to express the bizarre and not a little sinister contrast between them. P.10” This quote shows the West is a less fashionable place than the East. The East/West egg is a reference to the East and West of America. And here the author uses them to show the difference between those two places. He also says that the west is more sinister then the east and that is because the East is new money so there are more new homes, buildings, schools, etc. But West is old money and there are old family mansions and so on, which ties with the motif; Money and the theme; East vs. West. In this quote Nick is being judgmental as usual, which tells us about his personality.
Nick can be very judgmental, he always judges people and talk about them but never him, this quote is about Jay Gatsby; “His voice was solemn, as if the memory of that sudden extinction of a clan still haunted him. For a moment I suspected that he was pulling my leg, but a glance at him convinced me otherwise. P.64”. This quote shows Nicks over judgmental character. He talks about every single detail even Gatsby’s reactions. It relates to money as a motif because he talks about extinction of a clan. When you talk about a clan you talk about old money, very old money. And this says that Gatsby is the only one left of the clan so he is the owner of very old money. And clans comes from the west, once again this is about how West is mainly old money and east is new money.
Nick is old money and he tells us that he is part of a clan; “The Carraways are something of a clan, and we have a tradition that we’re descended from the Dukes of Buccleuch.” He is so money that one of his ancestors is a Duke. This quote is once again about how the west life of Nick is very old money. There are no such things as clans on the East only the west so we know that Nick is from the west. This quote is from chapter one. I chose many quotes from chapter one because it is one of the two only chapters where nick talks about himself.
So Nick is very old money and a very judgmental person. He is from the west even though he does not like the west, he moved to the East thinking he will never go back but he ended up going back. Money is something important about Nick because that is the reason all of this is happening because of Money. And Nick is very judgmental about people coming from West or East, or Old or Young money. Money, Nick and East vs. West all tie up together somehow. But maybe the author made it this way because Nick is a reflection of himself.
Thursday, January 12, 2012
Essay outline 2
Intro
Body 1: can we recapture the past? Of course we can.
Body 2: the rich are different. The only reason all of this is happening is because they are rich. It is because they can. And it also ties to the theme: what are we going to do with ourselves.
Body 3: past vs present gataby is fighting with Tom about the past and the present
Body 4: alcohol ties to rich are different because they are rich enough to afford alcohol at the hotel.
Body 5: weather and light which are tied: it is a sunny day which means it is gonna be about daisy and it ties up to trying to recapture the past.
Body 6: nick and how he is being judgmental and angry at them
Body 7: Tom and how he is being a dick
Body 8: gataby and how he is trying to recapture the past and who he is.
Conclusion
Body 1: can we recapture the past? Of course we can.
Body 2: the rich are different. The only reason all of this is happening is because they are rich. It is because they can. And it also ties to the theme: what are we going to do with ourselves.
Body 3: past vs present gataby is fighting with Tom about the past and the present
Body 4: alcohol ties to rich are different because they are rich enough to afford alcohol at the hotel.
Body 5: weather and light which are tied: it is a sunny day which means it is gonna be about daisy and it ties up to trying to recapture the past.
Body 6: nick and how he is being judgmental and angry at them
Body 7: Tom and how he is being a dick
Body 8: gataby and how he is trying to recapture the past and who he is.
Conclusion
Tuesday, January 10, 2012
Essay Outline
Intro
P1: The context of the scene. What came before, what is happening, and what is to come.
P2: The structure of the scene, the way the author has seperated the paragraphs.
P3: The characters involved in this scene and how they are described in this scene.
P4: The catharsis of the scene
P5: The theme of this scene, about capturing the past.
P6: Another theme about how rich people are different.
P7: Syntax and diction of the scene chosen by the author.
P8: The motifs, how the weather sets caracthers at metaphorical places.
Conclusion
P1: The context of the scene. What came before, what is happening, and what is to come.
P2: The structure of the scene, the way the author has seperated the paragraphs.
P3: The characters involved in this scene and how they are described in this scene.
P4: The catharsis of the scene
P5: The theme of this scene, about capturing the past.
P6: Another theme about how rich people are different.
P7: Syntax and diction of the scene chosen by the author.
P8: The motifs, how the weather sets caracthers at metaphorical places.
Conclusion
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